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Honestly you should steer clear from the "how to draw anime" books because that's the feeling I'm getting from this.
The proportions are all wrong, facial features are jumbled up all over the place. Hell even the leaves on the ground over here in Maine are more organized. I suggest that you go to your local library and research some Andrew Loomis books so you can improve your art from the ground up. You should also start researching human anatomy and proper shading techniques. The color choice also leaves much to be desired. The comedy is stale, the color pallet is washed out. Just a critique.