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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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- Great Floating Eyes and Eyebrows 'Chibi! Floating eyes and eyebrows are my life long nemesis in the world of art and you have them in the second and last panels. Hair goes over eyebrows and eyes, not under them. (In the last panel, it's the outline of the eye that's floating over the hair.)
- His eye in the last panel is missing shadows where the hair drapes over them. You have shadows on the skin above and below the eye but you forgot the eye itself unless of course you intended him to have glowing eyes.
- The nose in the second panel looks funny. In my opinion, instead of lines, you should have added a small, soft shadow like you did in the corner of the mouth.
- The shadow on his spine is a little too strong and deep, it looks more like a seam being opened rather than a spine groove.
Except for those, it's really great.
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