Well I think it looks awesome as is but if you really want some criticism. . .
- Great Floating Eyes and Eyebrows 'Chibi! Floating eyes and eyebrows are my life long nemesis in the world of art and you have them in the second and last panels. Hair goes over eyebrows and eyes, not under them. (In the last panel, it's the outline of the eye that's floating over the hair.)
- His eye in the last panel is missing shadows where the hair drapes over them. You have shadows on the skin above and below the eye but you forgot the eye itself unless of course you intended him to have glowing eyes.
- The nose in the second panel looks funny. In my opinion, instead of lines, you should have added a small, soft shadow like you did in the corner of the mouth.
- The shadow on his spine is a little too strong and deep, it looks more like a seam being opened rather than a spine groove.
I have to say that I absolutely love CBB. (My favourite characters being Corey and Matthew :3) I really hope you keep cotinuing these into the future! Just a curious comment, how long does it take you to every comic roughly?
- Great Floating Eyes and Eyebrows 'Chibi! Floating eyes and eyebrows are my life long nemesis in the world of art and you have them in the second and last panels. Hair goes over eyebrows and eyes, not under them. (In the last panel, it's the outline of the eye that's floating over the hair.)
- His eye in the last panel is missing shadows where the hair drapes over them. You have shadows on the skin above and below the eye but you forgot the eye itself unless of course you intended him to have glowing eyes.
- The nose in the second panel looks funny. In my opinion, instead of lines, you should have added a small, soft shadow like you did in the corner of the mouth.
- The shadow on his spine is a little too strong and deep, it looks more like a seam being opened rather than a spine groove.
Except for those, it's really great.
The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork
Please sign up or login to post a critique.