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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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The proportions are all wrong, facial features are jumbled up all over the place. Hell even the leaves on the ground over here in Maine are more organized. I suggest that you go to your local library and research some Andrew Loomis books so you can improve your art from the ground up. You should also start researching human anatomy and proper shading techniques. The color choice also leaves much to be desired. The comedy is stale, the color pallet is washed out. Just a critique.
I'm not sure what it is about your chibis that are so endearing, but you've reached professional grade stuff with them, let me tell you. I am not exaggerating when I say you're at the point where you could very well sell your art or start a full-blown webcomic with its own domain. I like the "diary comics" spin you have going, but either by yourself or with a writing partner, you could very well have a massive following on a fiction series.
Basically I like your shit bro >:33
Never stop being awesome
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